October 21, 2015 – Amanda's Book Nook

So… I really enjoyed the sarcastic witty comebacks from the girls because I am from the South and they just made sense. Also, they are sayings I would expect to hear spouting from the mouths my own teens. I enjoyed the storyline though it is a little overused and the content didn’t really have anything new to offer.
That being said, the lovey-dovey, I’ll love you until the end of time, have my baby even though I just met you three days ago…(not really, but you get what I’m saying) was a little hard to swallow. There was very little build up before the climatic fight for your life scenario and then it just kind of fizzled from there. The potential is definitely there, but it just didn’t land in the bullseye, yet.
I’m a very critical reader and the grammatical errors were slightly distracting as well. With a good proofread and some tweaks in the he said, she told, he asked type conversations, this could be a 4.5+ rating. As it stands and as I can’t give half stars, I’ll have to rate this a 3 for meh, I can take it or leave it.